by Stephen Book
Though embattled with age — its autumn leaves blown away, its gnarled coat threadbare and frayed with a thousand empty branches — the Oak stands in the backyard like a seasoned and faithful companion. In 1968, Dad planted it the month I was born, marking time even though the tree was already seven years old. During the summer of 1977, my best pal Charlie and I, along with a half dozen of our friends, ran from my dad toward the tree, screaming as we found safety at the "base." 1978 came, and Dad built a fort upon the branches of the tree; and then we climbed inside, with only our sleeping bags and a couple of Daisy pellet guns, to see the world as Davy Crockett might have seen it, gritting our teeth as Santa Anna unleashed his brutal force upon the never-say-die men of the Alamo. Four years later, I discovered that Dad had seen me and Sandy Kirshman (something I thought was my own little secret) when I found the place in the trunk where he carved: JD & SK, First Kiss, 1984. Dad is gone now; but at least I still have the old tree, and with it all that remains.
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Stephen Book is a CPA, working in corporate America while carving out any time he can to build a writing career. He currently lives in Texas.
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All That Remains
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11 comments:
this was a lovely tribute to dad and the tree. a pity each sentence was long and broken up into sections, with semicolons as an excuse to pause. but with only six periods to play with, i understand the limitations. still, good work! a mini-story all in itself. thanks!
A beautiful tribute. Thank you for sharing the memory.
So many tender moments. I can feel the quiet affection between father and son. Nicely done.
An excellent six through and through. Great job. Keep writing!
A beautiful tribute to a father's love and the shaping memories of childhood. Thanks for sharing.
excellent.
Ah Stephen... super sentiment here. Lovely, just lovely. Peace, friend...
Beautiful, loveing tribute.
Loved it darlin'!
Wow, nice six - almost enough there for a novel! ;-)
May the old tree live forever, holding precious memories in its boughs. Your words moved me in a special way, Stephen, as I have a special tree that reminds me of my daddy, too.
A big "Thank You" to everyone for the thoughtful words. I appreciate all the comments.
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