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Cheap Shoes

by Rion

Raj has ideas like others have heartbeats, each one racing and raving in his subconscious like a loon. Not that the observer can notice, but Raj is on fire. Each silent moment intensifies the forging heat where he focuses his attention. When he jokingly kissed your hand in Organic Chemistry, why did you flinch away from his sandalwood skin? For in this one moment all of his ideas and passions were distilled into one simple devotional act towards you. You could have become a patroness to his peculiar genius, were you not blinded by the faint scent of curry, the cheap shoes.

6S

Rion (Amy Chesbro), author of Submsson, challenges 6S authors to a duel at Raincoat Flashers.

8 comments:

Sean said...

i really enjoyed this. struck me as very "real"

Anonymous said...

Excellent six.

Guy Anthony De Marco said...

Clever sixer, didn't sound preachy but had a solid message.

Bob Jacobs said...

Amusing and well written. I like the way you conveyed what you had to say here.

Rion said...

Thanks folks!

Anonymous said...

my favorite, so far

Anonymom said...

Love this one...it was indeed very real and passionate.

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