by Katie McCullough
I used to watch her drink cranberry juice with great disdain like clockwork every morning. Red smears in a glass that matched the menagerie of broken veins in her cheeks. She’d pour a robust glug of vodka into her morning juice and shrug with laughter when I happened to frown. “There’s no harm in having a little fun,” she’d sing as she placed another empty bottle in the bin or on the side. She’d been having fun non-stop for the last twelve years and wanted everyone to join in, so far as to lace the fruit punch with gin at my fourteenth birthday party. Her last drink was a tumbler of rum that stuck to the table with its syrupy mass - I’ve yet to touch if for fear of drinking it myself and honoring my mother.
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Katie McCullough is a screenwriter and playwright whose tools of choice are her hands and anything to write with (as well as her mouth to talk to people). She's a graduate of Bournemouth Media School and The Royal Court, London, and has had several readings at the ICA and Theatre Royal, Stratford East. Her website is here.
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7 comments:
Great piece Katie :)
Thanks Jessica :)
6 sentences that pack a wallop!
shades of a tennessee williams character...
Thank you Brenda, you sell it well! ;)
Thanks for the compliment Quin, very flattering. Not bad for my first attempt at a Sixer eh?
I like it - and I get it. I like the feelings brought out by the word honouring in the last sentence.
I would like to suggest that the first sentence can be a bit confusing: "I used to watch her drink cranberry joice with great disdain like clockwork every morning."
My first reading made me ask, "How do you drink cranberry juice with great disdain?". The frown in sentence three led me to conclude that the great disdain relates to the watching, not the drinking.
I'm over-analysing. Nice story. Good title.
Thanks Bernard for your comments, glad you liked. With regards to the disdain it's the Mother who is expressing dislike to the cranberry juice which is why she pours in the vodka. Almost like trying to be healthy then backtracking because they can't be bothered, but at least they can say they've tried. But the frown is very much the child.
Thanks for your comments once again, I can understand how it can be read both ways now you point it out. The title has the many layers, exactly what I wanted.
Once again, thank you for reading and taking time to comment!
Kx.
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