by Joseph Grant
Youth is the ultimate currency, the man with the unfortunate name of Heinrich Goebbels said and smiled as he sat safely in police custody. The detectives had no idea why the man’s driver’s license listed his age as 104, even though he looked no older than 45, if that. But what they did know was that they had apprehended one of the world’s worst serial killers, if the bodies found on his large estate and the pungent stench of others unfound were any indication. He admitted everything most freely and told them how he gave the gift of death to each of his victims by means of draining the life out of them, means by which even he was not certain; but he confessed to possessing this malady from an early age, a timeframe that preceded their fathers and grandfathers and argued that he only freed his so-called victims from this mortal coil. Labeled insane by the detectives and a vampire by the newspapers, he scoffed vociferously at both indictments as he was clearly not mad and had no more power to instill eternal life than they had to keep him behind bars. He would be crueler to these policemen than he had been to his usual captors of Victorian London and pre-Revolutionary Paris, promising to leave these oh-so-nasty detectives, DA and judge to the cruel point of senility but not quite yet dead, while he would morph to the appearance of a much younger man, evading capture once again but this time, for more than 75 years.
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Joseph Grant dedicates this six to the "Master of the Macabre," Adam J. Whitlatch.
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16 comments:
He was jack the ripper and the stoneman and and and.. stunned.
Superb
To me!? AWESOME! I LOVE THIS PIECE! The Word Weaver strikes again! Mua ha ha ha ha!
Beautifully woven. Your best so far, I think.
I'm so glad I read this is the daylight. Before I go out this evening I'll check the back area of my SUV. Tight and spooky my friend.
Jeanette Cheezum
Deep, dark, and a little bit twisted, but as usual, incredibly well writeen (I feel a strong sense of both Poe and King done with the Joe Grant flair). Tightly written, descriptive, and a little bit eerie. Great six!
K
This is wonderful, Joe. You're bloody good, you are.
Nice work, Joe.
Joe, this was wonderfully creepy. I loved every minute of it.
Good stuff here. Your best creepy to date. Shiverrrrrr... Peace, Linda
Thank you all for your comments. I'm so very appreciative that anyone likes my stories in the first place and secondly, comments on them.
Wonderful Joe! Very, very imaginative and beautifully put together.
Ew Joe - don't think I've ever had the opportunity to call you creepy before...but, Joe...YOU'RE CREEPY!
This was good. Of course, Rob always has to stick me near you so I look like I can't put a sentence together!
Another masterpiece by a master (with a nod to Adam)
Caroline
caccy46
Creepy, Joe. And I mean that in a good way.
Thank you Paul, Carrie and Dave!
Oh, could you please write a whole novel based on this story? I would LOVE that. I so wanted more!
I have thought about, Mary. :D
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