by Michael Solender
She lie in bed, hours since retiring, churning and tossing fitfully in the black dark arid night air that sank in through the open window. The crickets did not drown out the recurring chorus from the mornings misdeeds that rattled in her heavy, bony head. She felt truly sorry... she was sorry... but the words that leaped from her lips not in anger but with vengeance had found their target squarely. Wounded and shocked at the same time he immediately retreated to the extra bedroom and shut the door tightly; she heard his tears steadily falling, each taking another drop of what little affection was left for her. Now, she pitched and flopped, her bed cold in the hot air without him. Morning would not bring her relief and she knew this, she covered her ears to make it stop hurting.
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Michael Solender is a corporate refugee and freelance writer based in Charlotte, North Carolina. He writes a weekly Neighborhoods column for the Charlotte Observer and blogs here.
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5 comments:
I felt every word of this. Very well done.
This is really wonderful Michael...really wonderful.
Lorianne
Heart felt and powerful. Love the emotional punch this delivers.
KM
Jeanette Cheezum
No one wants to hurt someone they have shared a relationship with. This is vivid.
each taking another drop of what little affection was left for her.
Strong feeling dealt with openly and honestly, and poetically.
Wonderful share from deep down.
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