20090129

Laying Down an Old Friend

by A.J. Brown

With our bodies enveloped by the chill of the frigid air the two of us dug the hole large enough so the small casket would fit in it with room on all sides for us to stand in the hole as well. We talked and dug, dug and talked until, finally, it came time to lay the home made wooden box in its place where it would remain for as long as the world rotated. After placing the coffin in the open grave I looked up to see Sam crying, his shoulders hunched and his face in his hands, his breath billowing up above his head. I inhaled letting the cool air fill my lungs and pushed myself from the hole, careful not to step on the coffin, and went to him. Go on up to the house, I said, I'll finish burying Cargo and I'll be up there when I'm done. I watched him into the house and then turned back to the grave, my heart heavy and tears in my eyes as I lifted the shovel and tossed the first bit of dirt onto the casket.

6S

A.J. Brown, married with two children, is a southern boy with a penchant for the dark side. (Click here to make a donation to A.J., half of which will support 6S.)

21 comments:

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

A.J., as the author, you are #1 in the upcoming "Old Friend" Comment Lottery...

(a tear fell from my eye...)

AJ Brown said...

For those wondering about this piece, Cargo is a dog. I originally had that in there but took it out.

I wrote this the night I helped my brother-in-law bury his 15 year old tan lab. It was below 30 degrees out. I'm from the south and we bury dead animals all the time, but when it is one that we loved and cherished for 15+ years it really made it difficult.

I hope you all enjoyed the story.

AJ

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

A.J. is also the author of "The Legend of Hollis Williams..."
http://sixsentences.blogspot.com/2009/01/legend-of-hollis-williams.html

Cat said...

I figured it was a pet - I can totally relate - how hard life can be when we open ourselves up to furry love - but also how rewarding it can be as well!

Laurita said...

Your words made it clear you were talking about a beloved pet. You captured with quiet sincerity the grief that comes with saying good-bye to a loyal friend.

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

Cat - #2, Laurita - #3. :)

Melody said...

I knew right away it was your pet you were saying good-bye to. My two labs are 14 and 10 and I am not looking forward to that very sad day. Very well written six describing the sadness we all feel when we lose that special part of our family.

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

Melody - #3

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

Whoops! Sorry! Melody is #4!

Sherry Allyn Norman said...
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Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

Sherry - #5

Sherry Allyn Norman said...

Well done, A.J.

It's always sad when we lay an old friend to rest.

Thank you for pointing the way.

Sherry Cat

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

Just confirming that Sherry is #5.

Fran Friel said...

AJ - Another wonderful piece of writing and life. You inspire me.

My condolences to you and Sam...and Godspeed to dear Cargo (I could barely restrain myself from writing precious Cargo, but there it is anyway...precious, no doubt).

Many Hugs,
Fran

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

Hi Fran - you're #6!

Madam Z said...

This is a touching tale. I did not even suspect that it was a pet being buried, until I read the name, "Cargo." Oddly, I felt relieved, although I realize that some of us can grieve for our pets almost as much as for our humans.

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

Madam Z, #7.

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

The Comment Lottery for this Six is now closed. Check back on Monday, 2/2 to find out the winner!

(Feel free to continue leaving comments for AJ...)

AJ Brown said...

Nelson, what is the comment lottery?

AJ

Nelson the 6S Mouse said...

Hi AJ! Tune in on Monday, 2/2...

Just check back here in the comments section on Monday morning at 9am, and you'll see!

:)

AJ Brown said...

Did I miss it?