by D.J. Berndt
Poems say, "read me." Cigarettes say, "smoke me." Bottles of beer say, "drink me." Women say, "love me." Pills say, "swallow me." I don't say anything.
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D.J. Berndt has accomplished nothing of importance.
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11 comments:
Men say, "what?"
I say you did say something in this six. Unique.
I had a smarty-pants comment but won't leave it as I don't know the speaker and the speaker doesn't know me.
I do like this 6 :-)
this said: keep writiing.
You said a lot in 6 :)
GBU
Arti
Grass says, "Mow me."
Men say, "Blow me."
Flowers say, "Pluck me."
Men say, "
Well, you get the idea.
D.J., you DID accomplish something important. You inspired me and, no doubt, others to play this entertaining word game. Beats worrying about the election!
Well dear lady-this was a world wind of entertainment. :)
Jeanette Cheezum
Nice.
What you accomplished was a wonderful piece in which you resisted the urge to pack as much into six sentences as possible. This thing floats. (That's a good thing.)
Packs a punch for sure.
LOL - Love this and madame z's addition as well!
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