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What She Knew Before Nothing

by Jeni Rall

"If out of the clear blue a man says he doesn’t deserve you, it means he strayed. Pack your bags and scat." This advice was given by my great aunt Beula over a slice of buttermilk pie (a taste she'd loathed but had now forgotten) in the summer steam of ’89 - her half empty head spilling epigrams like grain so the nothingness could nest. Twelve years later, stirring a pot of fat and bitter greens, I learned she spoke the truth. "He’s feeling bad," she divined, flicking her tongue across her spoon. "But not bad enough."

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Jeni Rall, author of The Poem, lives and writes in the sausage capitol of Texas. You can read a lot of nonsense about her here.

6 comments:

Madam Z said...

From the mouths of aunts! Such wisdom. And how I love that last statement, "He's feeling bad...but not bad enough." I predict he will be feeling worse, shortly. Thanks for the great taste of southern wisdom, Jeni.

DeborahB said...

Last line nails it. Good job!
DeborahB

roger daubach said...

and when a girl says, "you deserve better"? is that the same? hMmm?

Ian said...

Nice 6 Jeni - the last line really brings her to life. I've never told my wife that - she tells me all the time.

Doug said...

Very nice. I like how you use a remembrance to frame what ends up being a very complete story (as complete as you can get in six sentences).

silves said...

best 6 sentences i've read here so far. cheers!