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Don't Listen to the Sirens

by Paperwing


6S

Paperwing is a writer who lives in a small town in southern Wisconsin.

10 comments:

Leatherdykeuk said...

nicely done.

Roxanne said...

Excellent.

Anonymous said...

How sad. But done beautifully.

Jeanette Cheezum

Britt said...

Exceptionally well written! I love how the sirens play in this tale.

Joe said...

Wonderfully done and well written.

Anonymous said...

This is really good.

Daniel said...

Ooops. I am anonymous.

Not Daniel said...

And I'm not Daniel. But I also think this is really good!

Grey Johnson said...

A fine six that can stand alone, without the special visuals. Although they are interesting, I do not feel that they add to the story, and in fact are somewhat distracting.

foolishwriter said...

It's been a little while since I've read a really amazing story in six sentences - Yours is one.