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Ernestine & Hazel’s

by Janet Dale

They say this place used to be a whorehouse, not sure if that’s true — but there are an awful lot of small rooms tucked away upstairs. As sweat from my beer glass glides down my arm, I imagine bodies twisted on a twin mattress in the corner. So many people have crowded into this space; I’m inches from that corner now—pressed against the wall. Noticing the peeling paper, I reach up and start tearing off multi-colored strips. There’s an old upright and somebody starts playing and all of a sudden everyone is singing... every little thing she does is magic, every little thing just turns me on. It’s like a serenade from the future to the ladies of the past, I realize the irony and laugh ‘til my stomach hurts before turning my attention back to the peeling wall.

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Janet Dale, who blogs here, now holds a B.A. in English (Creative Writing) from the University of Memphis.

4 comments:

Randy Conner said...

Excellent. Also, I now have that song in my head.

Jeanette Cheezum said...

Great piece I could see, feel and smell the room.

Harry said...

I really liked, "It’s like a serenade from the future to the ladies of the past," and I don't mind that song being in my head at all. Very Nice!

William said...

Isn't the last sentence really two? Or at least missing a semi-colon? Love the story!!!