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A Sandy Found Sock

by Sophie Playle

It was a Saturday when she found the sock behind the sofa. She remembered always telling him off when he came running in, hyperactive from his adventures on the beach and jabbering about collecting crabs in buckets and poking beached jellyfish with driftwood – he’d always fling off his socks in the living room, eager to escape the damp sand that tormented his feet. She remembered when she set his dinner on the table, but he didn’t come home for it. Time stood still, yet the sun set too fast as she ran across the beach calling his name, until she was sobbing in time with the waves, alone in the dark. She became a shell; her husband left her. And now, sitting on the floor with the sandy sock in her hands, she lost herself in a tidal wave of guilt.

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Sophie Playle is a graduate of the UEA with a BA in English Lit with Creative Writing. She's trying to crack the publishing industry, but it's proving to be pretty bullet-proof. In the meantime, she stays at home writing, reading and blogging.

6 comments:

BCNeal said...

I like it and want to read more :)

quin browne said...

so beautifully done.

Sophie Playle said...

Thank you, BCNeal and quin browne. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Shaylen Maxwell said...

Amazing! Reminds me of how I always used to end up without one sock, whenever my boyfriend and I were trying to bond our rabbits. It was quite an ordeal and for whatever reason I always ended up with one sock afterward. He used to tease me about it. This is random, but it really resonated with me.

BIGTROUBLElittlephoenix said...

this is delicate and clever and has such feeling...like a swelling. it all fits together effectively and thoughtfully without being cliche. kudos.

Ian said...

"She became a shell"

That clinches it - an understated piece with a flavour that lingers. Salty, of course...