by Nik Perring
January 2009 "Six of the Month" Nominee
School didn't suit him, it was boring, so he left when he was fifteen. He started working in a factory, packing pills, but that didn't suit him either so he resigned and found work at a bakery, but he didn't like it there either. He went on the dole, but the dole didn't suit him, not enough money, nothing to do, so he joined the army. Staying on base didn't suit him but that was fine because before long he was transferred, sent to the front. He liked it there, felt at home, alive, like he was doing something worthwhile, but one day he got in the way of a bullet. The wheelchair they put him in didn't suit him at all.
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Nik Perring is a writer and workshop leader from the UK. He's published short stories, poems and a children's book. He blogs here, and has a website here.
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An Unhappy Man
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18 comments:
A sad tale that happens far too often. Nice 6S.
caccy46
Caroline Wells
Nik, very good 6.
Jeanette Cheezum
Fabulous - sharp and sassy. I loved it.
Axxx
A very sharp 6S Nik - shivers up the spine stuff!
Diane
Excellent.
A cruel six, Nik. Very powerful.
Thanks for reading, folks, and for taking the time to leave a comment. I'm thrilled you liked it.
Nik
Ka Pow!
Love this, Nik - great writing.
Strongest piece I've seen here in a while.
Love this six.
Good work Nik.
Thank you!
And yes, Ka Pow indeed!
Nik
A sorrowful tale, well told.
Very complete. Great writing. Please contribute more.
Great, concise and extremely well-done. Excellent job, Nik.
Thanks all!
Nik
Thanks for your comments, all - I really appreciate them.
This story's just been nominated for Six of The Best - if you'd like to vote for it you can do so here:
http://sixofthemonthjan09.blogspot.com/
Once again, thank you!
Nik
Hi Nik, I just cast my vote for you - good luck!
Valerie
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