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An Unhappy Man

by Nik Perring

January 2009 "Six of the Month" Nominee

School didn't suit him, it was boring, so he left when he was fifteen. He started working in a factory, packing pills, but that didn't suit him either so he resigned and found work at a bakery, but he didn't like it there either. He went on the dole, but the dole didn't suit him, not enough money, nothing to do, so he joined the army. Staying on base didn't suit him but that was fine because before long he was transferred, sent to the front. He liked it there, felt at home, alive, like he was doing something worthwhile, but one day he got in the way of a bullet. The wheelchair they put him in didn't suit him at all.

6S

Nik Perring is a writer and workshop leader from the UK. He's published short stories, poems and a children's book. He blogs here, and has a website here.

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

A sad tale that happens far too often. Nice 6S.
caccy46
Caroline Wells

Anonymous said...

Nik, very good 6.

Jeanette Cheezum

Anne Brooke said...

Fabulous - sharp and sassy. I loved it.

Axxx

Diane Becker said...

A very sharp 6S Nik - shivers up the spine stuff!

Diane

Raymond said...

Excellent.

Sarah Hilary said...

A cruel six, Nik. Very powerful.

Nik's Blog said...

Thanks for reading, folks, and for taking the time to leave a comment. I'm thrilled you liked it.

Nik

paul d brazill said...

Ka Pow!

Allison said...

Love this, Nik - great writing.

Alexander said...

Strongest piece I've seen here in a while.

naomirochelle said...

Love this six.
Good work Nik.

Nik's Blog said...

Thank you!

And yes, Ka Pow indeed!

Nik

Madam Z said...

A sorrowful tale, well told.

Toby said...

Very complete. Great writing. Please contribute more.

Joe said...

Great, concise and extremely well-done. Excellent job, Nik.

Nik's Blog said...

Thanks all!

Nik

Nik's Blog said...

Thanks for your comments, all - I really appreciate them.

This story's just been nominated for Six of The Best - if you'd like to vote for it you can do so here:

http://sixofthemonthjan09.blogspot.com/

Once again, thank you!

Nik

Valerie O'Riordan said...

Hi Nik, I just cast my vote for you - good luck!

Valerie