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You Think I’m Stupid

by Doug McIntire

You think I’m stupid because I’m still here. I’m not. I’m waiting. I’m not waiting for you to make a mistake. I’m waiting for the exact moment when you will unsuspectingly place your trust in me at a time when you are most vulnerable. Then I will unleash my vengeance upon you, laying you bare and leaving you empty and forlorn.

6S

Doug McIntire is trying hard to make writing his primary job instead of his secondary one. You can find out more about him here.

6 comments:

ted said...

spine-tingling.

Anonymous said...

Yikes! Well written 6S. That's six sentences full of a lot of anger.
Caccy46

Anonymous said...

This is griping. Good job.


Jeanette Cheezum

mgirl said...

I wouldn't want to be your enemy. Very powerful six!

Madam Z said...

Ah...revenge is sweet. I'll keep this intense six in mind, for when I need to "unleash my vengeance" on some unsuspecting foe.

Alone on the Isle said...

Dedication to a singular mission is a beautiful thing, regardless of its outcome.