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The Wrong Side of the Door

by Cherry Homer

I’m standing on the wrong side of a door that won’t open. If I could reach through it, I would be able to touch the shoulder of the person I want to be. As it is, I’m trapped here. Between your dreams and mine. Why must I always tread the paths you’ve chosen? I’ve a mind of my own, but the power to use it leaked away, along with my control, the night you kissed me and told me beautiful lies.

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Cherry Homer lives in the UK. She's a member of Critters Bar, a forum for writers to post, read, and critique short stories.

7 comments:

Leatherdykeuk said...

Lovely piece.

Joe said...

Wow, this is a great piece. Evocative and just plain dazzling in its beauty and originality. Look forward to more of your work.

GM said...

I love this piece. It's both surreal and strikingly real at the same time. Nice work.

Anonymous said...

Outstanding.

Anonymous said...

Cherry - love this still
caccy46 (Caroline W)

Quin Browne said...

beautiful lies are the best kind.

Bob Jacobs said...

Nice one, Cherry.

Cheers,
Rob