20080102

Bullet Quick

by Bill Unsworth

Now, at twenty-four, I dream again of Train Shore and the improbable dunes of my childhood summer. Left out the screen door and I am running barefoot, on down the hill and past the Grocery Boy Junior. Over the rise it still remains: tall reeds and white sand a strange bulwark, keeping the creep of North Carolina clay always fifteen feet away from the tracks. My memory is bad now, so I cannot say if I ever really sprinted through the back lot behind the Grocery Boy or if I ever made my rows and stacks of pennies on those buzzing tracks, but this dream is solid as the still amber air - preserved within it the reeds still clack and the oil smell rises off the railroad ties. These days, I don't need to remember; when I dream, it is always left out the screen door and bullet quick down to Train Shore, then diving through the clacking reeds. I leave my feet among the eye-high strands and hurtle heedless forward, as does a fast black train.

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Bill Unsworth wrote this story. He lives in New York now.

6 comments:

Leatherdykeuk said...

Such vivid memories. I see them clearly.

Quin said...

yes, we ran. closing my eyes, i can remember that feel of the ground on my feet, running for the same reason.

thank you for that.

Madam Z said...

What a scary dream! I hope it's not true.

Ian said...

There’s a novel’s worth of feeling and images in this. Reminds me of when we used to flatten pennies on the tracks near my home. Wish I’d kept them…

B said...

Brilliant. Beautiful. Bewitching.

Alone on the Isle said...

The opening line -- "Now, at twenty-four, I dream again of Train Shore and the improbable dunes of my childhood summer." -- is all it took to bring me back to my childhood. Thank you.