20071202

With Every Word

by Kevin Michaels

The bedroom was still as our conversation dissolved into a heavy silence broken only by the ticking of the clock on her night table and the occasional sob that hadn’t yet been swallowed in her pillow. I stubbed out my cigarette and leaned forward in the chair, watching her expression and wishing I could be there in ways I didn’t fully understand any more. I knew she was lonely for words I couldn’t find in myself; little white lies that might ease the pain, but there hadn’t been honesty between us in years and I was done bending the truth. I could have told her again that everything would be all right, but neither one of us believed the words, so I just stared at the clock through the quiet of the night and watched the minutes fall away like hours. When she finally closed her eyes one last time I wiped off my tears with the back of my hand, took the keys from the glass bowl by the door, and drove away in the big block Buick that had been parked in her garage. I wanted to believe that she hadn’t suffered but that was another lie; you want to believe anything that makes you feel better about your mom dying, even when it isn’t true.

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Kevin Michaels, author of The Edge of Night, is everything New Jersey (attitude, edginess, Bruce Springsteen, and Tony Soprano). The author of two upcoming novels ("Bounce" and "Still Black Remains"), he has also written a number of short stories and articles. He lives at the Jersey Shore and refuses to leave.

7 comments:

Madam Z said...

Big lies, little white lies...none of them matter after your mom closes "her eyes one last time." Believe whatever you want.

I think there's a message in here somewhere, for those whose mums are still breathing...

Thank you, Kevin.

mgirl said...

This is very sad, Kevin, and I have sat on that very bedside. You describe it very well in six sentences.

Quin said...

you started me in one place, and left me somewhere else. quite a journey in six

Anonymous said...

good stuff - take care - and thanks for the DOGZPLOT shout out on your blog post - barry

Adam J. Whitlatch said...

So much fit into only six sentences. Well written, my friend.

In Search of Hemingway said...

This is really well written, and hits a number of emotional chords. Like Quin said, you start one place and take us to an entirely different place. Short, powerful, and excellent.

Joe said...

A well-written and evocative piece for those of us who have shared that same sense of loss. Well done.